Some people think that all university students should study whatever they
like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology.
Present both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern-day, the controversy of choosing personal interest subjects or selecting such trendy modules as science and technology in educational programs has raised a great deal of public attention. In my opinion, while there is a wide range of advantages of the latter, i would argue that the former is a better option.
On the one hand, the concentration of hopeful subjects is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, due to the industrial term, it would be easier for those students who graduate from technology and science majors to have job opportunities as well as earn a higher salary. Obviously, people are able to feed up their family and satisfy their living-condition without suffering joblessness. Secondly, governments ensure the knowledge and skills in heavy industry are covered. In addition, by focusing on technology and science may lead to the economic growth, inventions, and a certain future of one’s nation.
On the other hand, i concur that choosing preferable modules is better than a focus on trendy subjects. The first reason is that if students can figure out their favorite academic discipline at an early time, they would definitely devote enthusiasm and passionate about to invest deeper comprehension in their subjects. As a result, this could help them significantly enjoying their career and becoming an expert in their field after graduating from post-secondary education. In addition, the excessive selection of subjects can render more harm than good. For instance, it has positive influences on the balance of workforce, the scarcity of labour in numerous sectors such as history, music and education may occur.
In conclusion, while selecting practical subjects is advantageous, i strongly believe that choosing one’s favorite modules is a better option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37588652482 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04105668366 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0149279166 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3846153846 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125101937864 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384841948371 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324561035592 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692876730674 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319434705561 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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