Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study a subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, education plays a vital role in student career. few people believe that all campus students should learn as there own choice, but few think that they should restrict to the only restricted for the subject that will be beneficial for upcoming life, like belong to science and technology. I think that students can study according to their taste according to the university rather than only science and technology. In this essay i will explain and exemplify my opinion.
On the one hand, i would like to discuss why student need to be allowed to learn the subject of their interest, because every student has different choice of interest. one of the main reason behind this would be, student will be encourage in to expand their knowlege and skills in their interested field.For instance, some students who has knowlege in arts will definetly attracts towards subject art rather than studying science and technology which just a part of the course for those students like wise all students should have the right to select their field.
On the other hand, i would like to focus on restricting the students to learn only science and technology, this would definetly limit the knowledge of the learners at university. Even though science and technology are subject which may brighten the career of the students, it is not compulsory to learn only those. For example, at university if all the students are just permitted to learn the respected subject, its just unfair for the students interest in other fields. Hence, it could not allow to shine in their dream future.
In conclusion, with the above explanation it is clear that along with the subject science and technology, students should given oppourtunity for selecting their favourite field to explore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06484641638 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55917627751 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7971258965 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34912889961 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124001749644 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833147403505 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210320478653 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872145751105 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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