Some people think that children should start primary school later in life, others think that they should start it before 7. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The appropriate age to enter primary education is debated by parents. Some of them become de-motivated due to the mental stress that the education system imposes on young learners, but then again, many guardians, including me, found it more appropriate to start primary education before the offspring turn 7. In this essay, both the views will be discussed in the light of logic.
A student, entering primary education, gets exposed to extensive pressure, which is hard for a young person to manage. To illustrate, small children has to comply with the class lectures as well as daily homework, not to mention the punishments in case of non-compliance. Moreover, those young-lings have to compete with each-other to secure better placements in the class. All these activities result in heavy mental burden for the children which they do not find comfortable to manage. In many cases, these negativity result in physical sickness as well as mental trauma.
However, like many other parents who consider the first 7 years to be the best time to learn, I believe that every children shall be oriented to schools before this age. As the young people contain a curious mind, it is the perfect time to feed their curiosity with knowledge. A research, conducted by the psychologists of Oxford University, revealed that a person is 35% more potent to learn a new language at the age of 6 than later of his life. Considering the outcome indicating potentials of a child’s brain to learn before they get older, entering them in schools before they turn 7 is justified.
To conclude, the parents have to send their loved ones to the schools, not matter what their age is. Although education system imposes heavy pressure on those young learners, we have to depend on their latent capability to learn at early age of their life and let them endure the load.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95207667732 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72787328404 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.360105488 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154853347503 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473421920611 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366975816728 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839406507347 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525093631182 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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