Some people think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important.
What are the different factors contributing to the success of country?
Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?
It is a widely held belief that nation’s success largely depends on their economic terms, but there is a strong counter argument amongst sections of the people that there are other factors also essential for the country’s growth and success. However, I am of the opinion that there are several other factors, apart from the economy, that could be used to assess a country.
Firstly, factors such as education, health care, employment, and human rights, equally contribute to national success. A good education system ensures the overall growth of students and this will result in increased intellectual people in the country. These people help in the shaping of country’s future. For example, a recent survey conducted by an eminent educationist David Mole at Germany revealed that there is 70% plummet in foreign investment in the engineering industry due to nation have a good and free education system.
Secondly, the healthcare system is very pivotal for success. In other words, this system ensures that every people in country are taken care, and this improve the standard of living. Moreover, human rights are also countable for nation growth. If there is on law for human rights and equality, this leads to damage to the country’s image.
Finally, education is an essential factor for country’s growth than other factors. Without education, there is a smaller number of educated people that require for development such as scientist, doctors, nurses, lawyer, and so on. As a result, there would be no proper healthcare system or jurisdiction system. So, it is very crucial for every nation that provides good education to people without inequality.
To conclude, countries can be assessed in many ways, while I must say that the standard of education is the best way to measures nations success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45544554455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21415209214 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4762106693 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346747573139 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120877093755 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913814412868 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247258224196 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946215823425 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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