Some people think it is better for children to grow up in cities, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both places.
It is really important to consider what place would be suitable for children’s future. Some people think life in the villages is more comfortable while others deny this and believe cities are the best for their kids. In following paragraphs, I will subtentiate both the benefits and drawbacks of living in such places.
To begin with, there are numerous advantages of living in urban cities and countryside. In case of former, people will have easy access to amenities avaibale in cities such as hospitals, schools, jobs, better transportation and so on. With latter, kids can be more close to the nature and escape the hustle and bustle of people in villages as such places are more quiter. As a result, they will be more connected more with the plants and animals instead of wasting time on video games and social media.
On the contrary, despite the merits there are some demerits which cannot be ignored. The first and the foremost is congestion. This is because cities are already overpopulated and if more people move there, the more issues will occur. For example, pollution, which is the main problem these days. On the other side, as less jobs are available in countryside areas, people would not have enough funds to send their children to better schools. Consequently, it will affect their future. Furthermore, villages do not have access to higher studies. Eventually, this will end up moving to the cities.
To conculde, as every development has both positive and negative sides. Although both places have their own importance, people should be aware of the other consequences as well and should think before moving anywhere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96797153025 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5714052526 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6570731858 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1176470588 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348780997959 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902804296073 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804016079981 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209527588548 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794843287479 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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