Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although single-sex schools are often considered to be ideal for educating both genders, some argue that co- education system is more beneficial. In my opinion, even though students can concentrate more on studies in single-gender schools, I believe that they learn social skills by studying in mixed education institutions.
On the one hand, boys and girls confront with fewer distractions in separate schools. This is because there are minimal chances of getting attracted toward the opposite sex, which is common during teenage. As a result, they pay more attention to contemplate academic subjects, leading to better performance in examinations. For instance, a survey conducted by Central Board of Secondary Education, India, found that the disciples of single-gender schools achieve higher percentages every year compared to others. However, I disagree with this view because boys and girls compete against each other in a classroom which encourages them to study more.
On the other hand, while attending mixed schools, pupils develop valuable interpersonal skills. In other word, students get opportunities to participate in teams encompassing both genders; therefore, they learn skills for conversating with the opposite gender and understand the behaviour pattern of each other. To illustrate, recent research revealed that 70% of the female professionals who have studied in co-education schools have less conflicts with their male colleagues. I agree with this opinion because these institutions prepare pupils for their adult life.
To conclude, albeit male and female students can focus on their education in a better way at separate schools, I think that learning in co-education schools is more advantageous because pupils learn imperative skills for socializing with the opposite sex.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69741697417 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99234008911 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8960678464 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241871282523 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892368014343 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710412501525 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145912474843 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426218217455 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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