Some people think that it is a good idea of all employees to wear uniform at work. To what extent so you agree or disagree.
Growth in software,insurance, tourism welcomed modern world with numerous opportunities for young generation. Industrial revolution in 17th century marked historical changes throughout the world world " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">and also brought some new discipline in working class community. Clothing and timings were one of such traits and our discussion about uniform at work has its roots in the outcome of revolution. I cannot totally agree with the above assertion as attitude towards work has changed changed " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">alot from 17th century. Let's elucidate few pro's and con's of the above argument.
Earlier days human tendency to associate themselves to particular employment or working for a reputed organisation considered as greatest achievement. An era which suffered unemployment attracted this attention by introducing uniform at work. it's not that there is much change in this aspect, for instance many people feel proud to wear uniform with company logos like Google, Accenture but this is not rampant and cannot be readily compared to intention behind work ethics of early age. Today such work uniform is common only in food and other service oriented companies. We all know people who work in Pizza huts , Mc Donalds wear uniforms as it is also method of advertising.
On the otherhand working with uniform is not a bad idea as it reminds team effort, collective responsibility in members and always welcomed by entreprenuers. In a study conducted by MBA students of California University it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">is revealed that productivity and team building increased by almost 32% by introducing uniform at work. Business analysts consider that there is essence of sincerity and loyalty in wearing uniform at work. However, these these " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">propositions are not out of criticism as these assertions assertions " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">are based on research conducted over only only " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">high profile work areas.
Nevertheless, many companies follows strict dress codes only on weekdays and allows semi formal dresses at work during weekends which turned out as not such bad idea. Hence a moderate approach is must while deciding uniform at work place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10696517413 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7487350271 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.91592027 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.4375 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136402400571 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780266574316 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574569232796 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114071227259 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578708893178 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.45 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.