Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and would cause a loss of culture.What are your opinions on this?Give reasons for you

Essay topics:

Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and would cause a loss of culture.

What are your opinions on this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Certain individuals have an opinion that it is mandatory to have worldwide common language for communication, whereas, others believe that it will lead to countries to lose their culture and identity. In my opinion, I do believe that countries ought to have a common language used for communication between people as this would make easy for sharing experience and opinion and to build strong relations with other countries .

Many people agree that countries should not choose a single language as a means of communication because it would lead to the loss of cultural identity as local languages of nations will die out. People will give more importance in learning the worldwide accepted global language and will not be interested in acquiring the knowledge of their own mother tongue. However, having a common language will make it easier for people to share their views and thoughts among people easily without the need of any translators. To elucidate, India is a land of innumerable cultures and languages, the common language used for communication in English.

Moreover, the world is becoming increasing globalised. Countries are interdependent on each other for technology, medicines, and trade. Thus, having a common language will make business much easier. People will be able to communicate trade regulations and business policies without misjudgement. Furthermore, by learning global language will open up new career prospects for people and thus will contribute in developing a successful professional life. To exemplify, English is a globally accepted language used in giant multi-national organizations and commerce business.

To conclude, I vehemently agree that having a worldwide common language for communication will not only help people to transit their perceptions and thinking easily but will also boost the business and economy of nations.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50694444444 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06301674413 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1760756843 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326831454332 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121764975428 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696368506573 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213891858527 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517479181767 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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