Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether the team sports are better than individual sports or not. In the following contemplation I will discuss that why I believe that team sports are better than individual sports.
Co-ordination and compassion amongst the players is compulsory in any team sports. Team sports requires that the individual players together put all their efforts and energy for winning the game. Games like cricket, football, relay race, and rowing are some of the sports that build the personality of each player participating in the sport. For example, in cricket when the best players like Dhoni and Kohli are not able to score then players like Dravid play with co-ordination and compassion among team members for winning. Moreover, mutual trust and respect are other qualities that are polished when a person joins team sports. All the individuals of the team thrusts their trust on each other for winning the game. They also learn to respect each other and develop team spirit.
On the contrary, others believe that individual sports are better as it helps to build focus and confidence of the player. Individual sports like chess, badminton, tennis or swimming require focus, physical fitness and individual efforts. The benefits of team sports for polishing the personality are far more than that of individual sports. While qualities like physical fitness, focus and confidence are sure to increase by playing individual sports but a person might not learn other important qualities. Qualities of mutual respect, trust, compassion, and co-ordination are learned only by playing team-sports.
In conclusion, I reiterate that both kind of sports have their own benefits but the qualities gained from team sports outweigh the qualities learned from individual sports. Each player undergoes cognitive development in respect of their personality and character which would benefit them throughout their life to be a better member of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26602564103 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62192612987 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445512820513 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 312.0 20.2975951904 1537% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1643.0 106.682146367 1540% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 312.0 20.7667163134 1502% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 94.0 7.06120827912 1331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289968583682 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.289968583682 0.084324248473 344% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199641086962 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431998391427 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 159.4 13.0946893788 1217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -245.2 50.2224549098 -488% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 125.0 11.3001002004 1106% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.77 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.15 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.8 10.1190380762 1253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 125.0 10.7795591182 1160% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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