Individuals have different opinions about keeping pet in home whether it is good or not. Where, according to me, it is harmful for minors and other people who live in society.
Considering the benefits of keeping pets at home, the predominant is that some pets are source of safety at home. Dogs are one of the example of those who provide safety at home. When all members of home are not available, on that time, the listening power of dogs is quite high, due to this, when any another person came into the home, they do crying. As a result, individuals do not have fear regarding the robbery. Apart from this, distinct small pets are source of entertainment for children as in thesedays, children are living alone at home due to their birth-givers go to job for earning. On that time, minors play with pets and reduce the loneleness.
To favour the view of those individuals who think keeping pets at home are dangerous and unhealthy for people, the primary disadvantage is that it create distinct ailments in society, for example, 5 years ago, the flu which name is swine, which is produced by the hens. Due to this, many deaths were happened. In addition to this, it is quite expensive to keep pets at home as pets need to eat food and accomodation. Dogs, for instance, require eags and meat for servivals. Thus, this create financial burden on the family. Also, when minors play with pets, preteens donot know how to play with it. Last month, the news was published in newspaper dog bitten the smal child and after bitting he was died.
In conclusion, although pets are source of entertainment and safety but it create diffrent kinds of problems, which are harmful for individuals.
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73648648649 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5557337534 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6285979706 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234299895846 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700853944488 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540689327475 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141532881347 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03755323377 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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