Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Compare the two views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are people including me who believe that it is essential to love and enjoy your work in spite of money you earn. However, other people disagree with this statement, assuming that earned money is the most essential thing. In this essay I will discuss the reasons behind both viewpoints and give my opinion.
Choosing a job is one of the most crucial life decisions that every person faces on the threshold of adulthood. Favorite job is chosen by taking into account one values, interests and skills. As Confucius says “Choose a job that you love and you will never have to work a day in your life”. I absolutely agree with this saying. Firstly, if you find a job that you enjoy, it will only give you pleasure and an opportunity to fulfill yourself, in addition enhance your personality traits. Secondly, when you love your job, you regard it as a hobby rather than inevitable ruts, no matter how much you earn. Moreover, if one completely devotes himself to his job, one gets great progress and good results in work.
On the contrary, people consider job as the way of being supported financially, whatever job they do. As the salary is essential in order to employees survive and have a good life, and the majority of people rely on money they get from their job. Moreover, a good paid job is a priority to cover housing, food, bills, health care and education. However, there are jobs which require high professional skills whereas not all of them are high-paid ones.
In conclusion, of course, salary is important but I strongly believe that satisfactory job is much more important because it makes people happy and inspired.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, of course, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54557473944 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6546042893 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35514426193 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105110428974 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899152198425 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191461201117 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664528963484 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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