Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable, discuss both views and give opinion.
Advanced technology have made life easier on the planet and influenced almost all fields. Therefore, human beings is becoming more civilized. However some individuals believe that technology has responsible to unfriendly behaviour of peoples. This essay will discuss the both views with logical explanations before evaluating the opinion.
To begin with, primarily, telecommunication technology such as internet, tv, radio, mobile phones have brought whole world closer, thus the good manners and way of conservation has been adopted by the people. Some television channels broadcast social programs that encourage people to take part in community work. A part form that social networking sites such as facebook, twitter are intensifying the strong relationship among different peoples. Secondly, due to busy schedule life of individuals, they can not manage the time to visit people as a smart-phone can overcome this conundrum. A telephonic conservation can be done from one end of world to other end.
On the other hand, one of the main reasons that the people have tendency to become more richer than others, so the profit treated as prior base rather than humanity. This habit develops a gap among peoples. Furthermore, technology have accomplished the need of individuals, hence the dependency on technology have also increased, so people have no spare time to visit outside and meet habitants. For instance, nowadays children spend most of the time in front of TV and computers and do not take part in outside activity, thus this separation bias compose them less sociable.
To sum up, no doubt, there some separation of technology that produce unfriendly cooperation among community. However the key factors of technology can make human for social responsible. In my point of view, the technology has risen the all fields that make human life enjoyable, civilized and became the entire world as ‘Global village’
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41390728477 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96067414982 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.316017013 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21259068405 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582058445667 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355435234276 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118354078457 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02735352684 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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