Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Methods to acquire news is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. While some people consider newspapers as the most effective way of receiving tidings, I would argue that it is no longer the best way to get news because of the developing online tidings.
On the one hand, nowadays, newspapers still have a foothold in society. First of all, let’s take a look at the fact that many older people would rather buy a newspaper than buy a technological device to get news. One reason behind it is that they afraid of learning how to use those modern appliances. Furthermore, it would be great to have a coffee while reading a newspaper. Take my grandfather as a typical example. Although my father bought him a smartphone, he refused to use it and gave it to me. He prefers reading the newspaper. This leads to the majority of the older generation still having reading newspaper habits.
On the other hand, it goes without saying that we are living in a 4.0 era, so people like convenient ways to get information. The younger generation has become increasingly obsessed with social networking sites such as Facebook or Tiktok. Just a few clicks and they know all information about the world. According to a recent survey about newspaper reading in a university in Ho Chi Minh City, only 3% of students read newspapers but not often. No one reads newspapers every day. These are remarkable numbers. Another point worth noting is that the information is updated quickly on social media, so they don’t have to wait till morning to obtain the news. As a result, young people tend to choose the media platform to receive news due to convenience and quickness.
Taking everything into consideration, although I believe that printed newspapers are still popular among certain groups of people, I’m not at all convinced that it is the best way to get the news as more and more people get drawn into using the Internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
... get news. One reason behind it is that they afraid of learning how to use those modern app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, look, so, still, while, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82530120482 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72780503477 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0699503761 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3157894737 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284808958086 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659913756427 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710765656722 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179624596997 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576569501761 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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