Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society.
Others, however, believe that school is place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that school is responsible to teach young people how to be a valuable member of society. Although there are some good arguments in favour of this issue, I think family plays more important role to learn this.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why children should learn social values in school. Training children is known as a study field in colleges and universities. In educational centers, the teachers who graduated in this field and so are more familiar with up-to-dated methods of teaching social values can train students. Moreover, many social skills need the educational space and facilities. For example, primary schools of the UK must arrange a police station tour for seven-years-old children with the aim of teaching traffic rules.
On the other hand, I believe that parents have more responsibilities in teaching social values to their children. The first reason is that parents have always been most important model of behavior for their children. Thus, they have to do their own best in society to show the benefits of being a good member to their children. Secondly, since children spend majority of their free time at home, parents must provide an environment in which children get more involved with social skills. Recent studies showed that the principles of social behavior can be taught to the young people in home by exposing them to the educational programs of media.
In conclusion, although parent and school alike should take responsibilities to teach social behavior principles to young people, in my opinion, family is more proper place to learn this.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14772727273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71274539965 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6169230427 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301820751798 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110158514736 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818931771925 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204023060879 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829010676646 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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