Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.
Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that school is responsible to teach young people how to be valuable members of society. While there are some good arguments in favour of this, I think the family has much more important role to learn this.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why school is a proper place to train social skills to children. Unlike first impressions, the training of children is not easy and needs an academic background. As a result, the teachers who graduated from colleges or universities and so are more familiar with up-to-dated methods of teaching social values should train students. Learning social skills needs also specific educational space and facilities. For example, elementary schools of the UK must arrange a police station tour for seven-years-old children with the aim of teaching traffic rules.
On the other hand, I believe that parents have more responsibilities in teaching social values to their children. The first reason is that parents have a great influence on their children and are always the most important model of behavior for them. In other words, in my personal perspective, the parent is the best teacher for kids and home is the best place to learn and practice social tasks. Secondly, since most children's free time is spent at home, parents must give an environment in which children get more involved with social tasks. Recent studies showed that children get familiar with half of the main principles of social behavior in the home through educational programs of media.
In conclusion, although parent and school alike should take responsibility to teach social behavior principles to young people, in my opinion, the family is a more proper place to learn this.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08156028369 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71148395981 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6321948438 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28141622853 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103974754703 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792914267434 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198452607148 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914489820634 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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