Some people think that spending a lot on birthday celebrations and wedding is a waste of money. But others think that it is important to young people and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a vexed question whether spending colossal amount of fiscal resources on celebrating special occasions is waste of precious resource or this celebration is vital for young generation and society. This essay will elaborate the both point of views following with my perspective on this facet.
Initializing with the prime notion, the segment of the society oppose wasting monetary resources for the sake of entertainment on special functions is a destructive approach because is the world of inflation managing future funds are highly required. to make the single day special with huge expenses is not feasible at all because it utilises the savings of hard work. People who support this point of view reckon that whole world is rushing in the direction of earning and due to that masses are working around the clock, so, this hard work means a lot. Everyone deserves better future, therefore, the utilisation of money should be in such area where individual can get benefit out of it.
Paradoxically, another group of individuals stimulate celebrations to make the occasion special because they have strong opinion that it is a constructive phenomenon not merely for adolescents but also for social purpose. Everybody have authority to lead their life with their own way and to make the life entertaining, it is required to have fun on their special dates for which they wait at least for a year. By this manner they get connected with their near and dear ones, that is already absent due to busy schedule. Moreover, get together builds strong bond with known, also provides golden opportunity to refresh the mind. To site a paradigm, working for longer hours is depressing tendency, so to have mental peace changes are required which leads towards exorbitant in productivity of human behaviour.
According to my prospective later facet weighing more than the former one because money is a source which can be earn by putting efforts, however, emotions and relaxation are the face which can not buy with the support of money. So, celebrations are the part of life which should be happen with the time. Besides, in this running world everyone just prerequisite materialistic world and neglecting relationships, so, celebrations provide chance to have quality hours with family and friends.
By analysing the whole scenario it can be recapitulated that former notion supporters are in favor of saving rather than spending on celebrations, whereas, another thought is in the side of having parties on the special days. I am completely agree with the secondary category of people because these days are special for everyone, which falls once in a calendar , for this everybody waits for so long, so, it is required to fulfill desires as per their own wish because it is beneficial for social as well as personal amelioration.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-26 | jaspreet_kaur | 78 | view |
| 2020-12-25 | jaspreet_kaur | 73 | view |
- museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people say that a person s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that spending a lot on birthday celebrations and wedding is a waste of money But others think that it is important to young people and the society Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world to what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that spending a lot on birthday celebrations and wedding is a waste of money But others think that it is important to young people and the society Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...aging future funds are highly required. to make the single day special with huge e...
^^
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ard work means a lot. Everyone deserves better future, therefore, the utilisation of m...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happened'?
Suggestion: happened
...ns are the part of life which should be happen with the time. Besides, in this running...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...es on the special days. I am completely agree with the secondary category of people b...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...everyone, which falls once in a calendar , for this everybody waits for so long, s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10322580645 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80612283583 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552688172043 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9616501858 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.3125 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0625 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087493701266 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030817348855 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306396229315 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580688043644 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357443826788 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.