Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
To some people, the idea of adulthood seems blissfully joyful. To others, however, adulthood life is nothing more than being snowed under responsibilities and commitments. While adolescence is, unquestionably, the most peaceful period of life, it seems to me that adulthood offers its unique way of happiness for which we should be grateful.
Adolescence appears to be the happiest period of life as adolescents don’t need to be concerned about the less-pleasant matters of life. Children’s innocent thoughts are not familiar with the ugly concepts of life such as loss, disease, and envy. While during childhood, parents take full responsibility for the child’s life, children tend to live in the moment, bear no grudge in heart and love any creature around them. Hence, it is no surprise that childhood is regarded as the most pleasant period in life. Yet, adulthood brings along its own unique perks.
Free will is one of the most tempting aspects of adulthood toward which human being has always gravitated. Extraordinary experiences and unjustifiable intuitive decisions come along with free will as adults are expected to look after themselves without the supervision of others. Ergo, adulthood is usually accompanied by a broad variety of new experiences, some of which are gold and some of which are not.
Financial independence is the most significant aspects of adulthood which brings along many pleasures. During childhood, any financial decision, even as small as buying a toy, should be made under parent’s authority and children, more often than not, have to fight for what they desperately want. Therefore, having a personal income is a unique circumstance for those who were used to fighting for their ambitions as no longer need they to ask others for fulfilling their dreams.
Although the peaceful moments of adolescence are undeniably precious, I sincerely believe that the leeway and financial independence are the two key factors that make adulthood a unique experience and, to some extent, even happier than the innocent childhood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...piness for which we should be grateful. Adolescence appears to be the happiest p...
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...en happier than the innocent childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36391437309 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0493728571 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2125036828 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.933333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111327064558 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428607896304 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185927206222 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591726144404 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320142956422 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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