Some people think that they can go to to gym to remain fit, while other think that there are other better ways. Discuss both views along with your opinion.
Recently we can see, how people are taking care of themselves and stay in shape, by doing several activities to remain fit. Attending to the gym is a way for some people to be healthy, others believe there are better ways could help to look over our bodies and stay fit.
On the one hand, number of people go to the gym to practice, release their work stress and build a strong body. First, the gym is the right place for many individuals, it gives motivation to the one, in order to reach his/her goal, to what shape they want to be. Second, at the club you can find personal trainers, that can assist and follow up on your performance, by giving several exercises and tips that help to perform well and be in shape with a short period. For example, athletes attend to the gym regularly to stay fit and ready for their teams, to act well. In my opinion I think that the gym, is the right place to motivate the person to stay fit.
On the other hand, some people believe there are many other ways, could assist to remain fit. First, organize and schedule your time, plays a main role on your health, where the person won’t be stressful and worry about what he must do during the day. Second, eat healthy food, sleep well; even exercise at home by doing stretching or Zumba alone, can help to stay in shape, all of these can be done by watching videos through YouTube and you will save money. For example. Many doctors demand from their patient, to exercise by walking in the nature and enjoy the view that help to release stress and avoid any health symptoms. From my point of view, I don’t think that eating or playing some sport only, could help to stay fit.
As a conclusion, going to the gym for some people is important to stay fit, but for others they can exercise alone at home, play some sports and eat healthy. In my opinion, at the gym you can practice well, get the assistant and advise from the coach on what kind of food, supplements you must eat, to remain fit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41621621622 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13667580405 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2372734184 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310799927562 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110650728188 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861839149823 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204064959186 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260345938904 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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