Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion
Today, with the passage of time each and every country is on the path of development , ans with this development, there is a growing trend of visiting different places in different countries. It is a highly debated issue whether tourists should behave as the people of the jost country or should the host country accpt visitors as they are. Both stuations have their own pros and cons, which I will discuss in this essay.
There are many benefits of adopting the customs of the host country. Firstly, it decreases chances of misunderstanding and embarrassment. To elucidate, in the UK it is offensive to ask someone what their salary is, which is common in India. Secondly, a nations’s customs nd traditions are fascinating and offer a deeo insight into that country. People visit other countries to broaden their horizon. So, if tourists copy the customs of host country, they learn more about them and that too in an interesting way. Finally, visitors establish a rapport with local people because people feel respected when their customs are understood and imitated. The visitors become a member of the host country and so they do not suffer any culture shock.
On the other hand, there are many reason why a host country should tolerate and embrace foreign culture. To begin with, no country should cling on its own customs and traditions and not accept the new customs and traditions of the hosts. To exemplify, if the visitors are pure vegetarians, they should not be forces to eat non-vegetarian food just because the host country’s people eat that.
On the balance, I feel that someone who is moving to another country should respect the customs, culture, and traditions. This is necessary because a newcomer is like a guest in someone else’s home. So, he is expected to follow the rules of that country. However, it is not reasonable to compel a believer of a certain religion to ignore in order to comply with the local customs.
Summing up, mutual understanding between both the visitors and the host is necessary to maintain the harmony. A cosmopolitan society in which everyone is tolerant of each other’s customs and traditions is the need of the day. After all, today, we are part of a small global village and not a big planet Earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, after all, i feel, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91948051948 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78888507169 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524675324675 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9274937172 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302841771397 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839827551355 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827640685142 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162471745122 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084295558954 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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