In modern world,equal rights are being claimed by both the genders. But allowing women to become whatever they want is positive for them or the society at large? Many might strongly oppose this idea however, I firmly advocate this notion and will provide evidences to justify my view point further in this essay.
To embark upon, it is crucial not only for the empowerment of the womanhood but also for the entire humanity. It is no exaggeration to state that this class of society plays an vital role in building a robust foundation of any culture. If they will languish then the whole structure will deteriorate. For example in Taliban, women are being suppressed and deprived from their rights which has caused detrimental effect on the entire community.
Moreover, they are unassailable in fact, they are equally capable of accomplishing almost everything. Nowadays, women are no less than men indeed, they are evenly intelligent, quick, searing and impregnable. Therefore, they are efficient enough to solve any intricate case of Police department. I can reminisce, a very famous lady I.A.S officer Kiren Bedi who has been honoured by the Indian government several times for her bravery and diligence.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention assertively that the benefits of giving liberty to women to select the career of their own choice far outweigh any negative repercussions. It is mandatory for the upliftment of any class because they help in the development of children and if they are not substantial then the expectation of a inviolable lineage is simply a fantasy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , equal
In modern world,equal rights are being claimed by both the ge...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: Much might; A good deal of might
...itive for them or the society at large? Many might strongly oppose this idea however, I fi...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... state that this class of society plays an vital role in building a robust foundat...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing a robust foundation of any culture. If they will languish then the whole struc...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...I can reminisce, a very famous lady I.A.S officer Kiren Bedi who has been honoure...
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...not substantial then the expectation of a inviolable lineage is simply a fantasy....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12307692308 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87459799093 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1478762261 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151468891966 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527488363865 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471226873872 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844760463011 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179900045307 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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