Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is evident that the debate of whether zoos are good or bad for animals has taken center stage among the worlds environmental issues. While some people say that all animal enclosures must be closed, others argue that it preserves many species from going extinct. I completely agree with the latter. This essay will discuss both sides and support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, it is undeniable that animal enclosures force animals to live in captivity whereby they are depraved of freedom and the ability to use their natural instincts. To elaborate, animals which were designed by nature to roam the earth freely are now kept in a locked cage away from their natural homes.For example, the researchers at Harvard University found that animals held in zoo could no longer use their natural instincts to hunt and survive in the wild. Furthermore, the animals in the zoo have to endure harsh living conditions that they were not designed to survive in. For example of the 15 zoos in India, 13 zoos had habitats that were not suitable for the animals.
That being said, if zoos are not present, animals which are on the verge of extinction can no longer be protected from hunting activities. That is, with the rise of poaching, numerous species have been annihilated to the brink of extinction. Thus zoos act as a buffer to always keep such species alive. For example, all the east African elephants in the wild have been wiped out, however the Austrian zoo has a male and female east African elephant which can be used to ensure that the species survives. Thus it is my opinion that zoo's serve a far better purpose to animals.
To summarize, although zoo's restrict animals by removing their freedom, they serve a much nobler purpose of keeping several species alive for generations, hence it is my opinion that zoos must continue to exist in order to protect animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84472049689 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45079662027 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8883949959 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301284348906 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103304762212 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521335484077 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185616676752 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231587625118 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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