Some people thinks that technological progress have affected their lives to what agree do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In this contemporary era, technology is progressing at an exponential pace. Majority of the people relies on recent high-tech development for different activities in their daily life. Although there are certain issues involved in this advancement, it has greater impact among the people on various counts.
To begin with, the emergence of technology highly influenced the civilians in various manner. These automation made all the task precise besides effortless. As an evidence, the evolution of smartphones transformed the face of all the communication mediums. In olden days communications happened through letters, fax as well as telegrams which are tedious processes whereas due to the advanced technologies communications can take place in one click away by means of voice, video calling facilities, instant messaging applications and many more. Thus evolution of mobile phone is a potential development which could enhance the quality of life
Moreover, medical service has flourished as due to the update development is science and medicine. One among them is the evolution of robotics clubbed with artificial intelligence in medical sciences. Many hospitals use robots for surgeries, dispensing medicines as well as diagnosing purposes such as blood pressure monitoring, diabetic checks and many more. The created a feasible approach for the people to medical sciences and they are accustomed with the developments
However, people who depend on technology often protest that, the recent advancement is a curse to the modern world as it could spoil the young generation. The evolution of smartphones increased the crime rates drastically for the reason that people misuse it for crimes, hacking bank accounts, pornography and many more which would be a threat in the future.
In conclusion, people are acclimatised with the utilisation of various technology in their day to day life. Even though there are some drawbacks, modern developments in technology is a crucial necessity for humans in different aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this automation' or 'These automations'?
Suggestion: This automation; These automations
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...t messaging applications and many more. Thus evolution of mobile phone is a potentia...
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... which could enhance the quality of life Moreover, medical service has flourished...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60517799353 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08929469084 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3424749153 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138368799715 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519199257962 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466138610877 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863758418643 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506613719188 0.056905535591 89% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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