Some people use social media to keep in touch with other and news events.
Do you think the advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people consider using social media platforms to keep connected to others and for news. In my opinion, I believe that using social media to stay in touch with friends or others and relying on it for news can be harmful in the long run than the advantages it may provide.
Admittedly, some people think that social media is the best way to get connected to people and even to get updated about the news events as it is convenient and easily accessible. In other words, as the technology has improved, so most of the people can get connected to their friends, colleagues, and others, just from the convenience of their own home, not only this, they can catch up quickly with the news updates as well. Moreover, social media platforms such as Facebook, LinkedIn has provided accessible opportunities for everyone to get connected, and these sites even personalize the news according to the person's previous searches. Thus people tend to use social media for news more often than the news channels.
Nevertheless, despite these advantages, mentioned above, people who use social media to get connected to the people and even for news become easy prey to the criminals. Using these sites puts private data of people at the stake as it can be easily accessed by other people who can hack these sites and leak the information for their benefits. People also use them for catching up on news updates but can get into the trap of fake news, which has now become common nowadays, thus, leading to wrong information and many times to many disputes.
In conclusion, communications and news on social media sites can be misleading and can pose a threat of leakage of personal data that can be used by criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people consider using social media ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r words, as the technology has improved, so most of the people can get connected ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80338983051 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5785226558 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505084745763 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4743231 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.7 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344833214078 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17233002055 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893377435177 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231889513363 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107315583906 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.