In some places, people live with their parents until they are in their 20’s or 30’s. What might be the reason for this? Is it better for young people to live with their parents or leave home? Give reasons and relevant examples from your experience.
In India, girl live with the parents till they get marry and boys get marry and bring wife to live with parents. This is common things in India and happening from many many years. In Canada, I see child go away after high school. They get freedom and face life soon.
Firstly, family bond is strong in India and boys must care for parents. Parents working all the life to bring best thing for child. They get old, son take duty of the house and take care of parents. This is normal life. Secondly when people live like joint family too much support is getting. More sons in the family, more money getting in the house. Life become easy. Third, thing is because maybe have family busines and want to live in one house.
Young people go away is sometimes good and bad. For me it is best to stay with my parents. My mother loves me and my brother too much. I get very happy staying home as my mother cook special items all the time and we enjoy watch cricket on TV. So, it is better people stay with parents as much as possible as life away from parents not easy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
...mmon things in India and happening from many many years. In Canada, I see child go away a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bring the best'.
Suggestion: bring the best
...arents. Parents working all the life to bring best thing for child. They get old, son take...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24630541872 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.75670854084 2.80592935109 63% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.594481307 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.7058823529 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9411764706 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206863105466 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061813240731 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634216393037 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139862234903 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200042102861 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 13.0946893788 35% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.82 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.