Some school of thought think that people should choose their jobs based on income in order to provide security for their family.
Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job
What other factors should be considered
It is argued by some that an employment should selected depending on the salary to be received so as to provide safety to your household. This essay would discuss how essential money is when picking a job offer as it helps elevate the standard of living of an household and would name the proximity of an employer’s home to their workplace as another vital factor.
An employment offer should be picked based on the wages to be earned as this helps improve the living standard of a household. In some part of the world particularly the developing countries, many families thrive to survive on a daily basis, leaving below two dollars a day and they often find a way to sponsor at least one of their children through school so that he could get a good paying job after school, help improve the living condition of the family as well as sponsor his other siblings through school. For instance, In Nigeria, many parents look up to their children as their retirement plan, they work hard when young to train them through school with the hope that when they are older, these children would take proper care of them and without a good paying job, this hope would not become a reality.
Also, the proximity of an employee’s work to his home is an essential factor to consider when selecting a job. This prevents you from spending almost all your wages or salary on transportation especially for people who does not have a car and it also enables you get back home early enough without experiencing the stress associated with traffic. For example, in Lagos which is a big city, people who work very far from their home have to be awake as early as 4:30am just to be able to meet up with a resumption time of 8am. They do this on a daily basis from Monday to Friday and and even get back home as late as 11pm to continue the routine the following day.
In conclusion, a well paying job helps elevate the living conditions of a bloodline and the distance from an employees’ home to his office is a vital factor to consider when picking a job offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... depending on the salary to be received so as to provide safety to your household. This ...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...helps elevate the standard of living of an household and would name the proximity ...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
... another vital factor. An employment offer should be picked based on the wages to ...
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Line 5, column 578, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
... on a daily basis from Monday to Friday and and even get back home as late as 11pm to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53638814016 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48919169558 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504043126685 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1374457845 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.3 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279763907247 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115767826747 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475295234267 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174059412844 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236426023937 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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