Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
There some types of sports that are known as risk-taking sports and they are very thrilling. However, some people have enthusiastic about participation in such sports and it has various reasons, besides there is some solution to prevent such these dangerous activities.
There are several reasons that people enjoy doing extreme sports. One of the most important reason would be being the center of attention. Most of these people try adventurous sports such as base jumping or skydiving and filming themselves during the activity to share it in social media like Instagram or YouTube and then enjoy the fame and reputation of their actions. Moreover, some thrill-seekers willing to do dangerous sports because of the amount of Adrenaline and Endorphin release in their body. It is scientifically approved that these type of activities cause Adrenaline addiction in people and every time they do extreme sports they want more next time. Another scientific reason could be lack of Serotonin molecules in the brain of risk-takers that lead to less anxiety and more tendency to do such activities and risk their lives.
Some recommendation exists to reduce the harmful effects of dangerous sports. One of the most important ways could be educating people and making them aware of the negative consequences. For example, most of the people might know nothing about Adrenaline addiction that is caused by doing extreme sports. Furthermore, another reasonable way to tackle this problem could be using high-quality safe suits and equipment. In fact, equipment plays a vital role in saving the risk-takers life. Thus, educating people about the consequences and using equipment would be beneficial to decrease the mortal rate of such these sports.
To conclude, although dangerous activities are harmful and risking people’s lives, it has their own fans and there are some remarkable reasons such as Adrenalin addiction, a tendency to being famous or biologically characteristics. It also has some ways to prevent irreparable damage like education and using equipment and tools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38532110092 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89766284803 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516819571865 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6721878699 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286833323159 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103166733726 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724899198477 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198883858826 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724234840396 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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