Physical activity is considered to be most effective way by many in maintaining healthy life. On the contrary, some people believe that good health should be maintained by having healthy food. In my opinion, though both ways are equally good, striking balance between both of them is the most important factor in maintaining healthy lifestyle.
Many people believe that exercising regularly is the most important aspect to stay healthy. Working out frequently reduces unnecessary fat in the body & makes the muscles stronger. Stronger & fitter body means that it can also recover quickly in case of injuries. People who work out regularly when subjected to challenges involving physical stress like working for long hours in daily life can handle them with ease.
On the other hand, some people disagree with it. They argue that controlling the food intake plays the most important role in staying healthy. Their concern is that people when they get involved too much into physical exercise & body building often tend to consume artificial supplements to build bigger muscles which could be very dangerous in long term. They believe that the human body needs various nutrients to stay healthy which should be consumed through regular diet include Vitamins, Protein etc and it is important to consume all the required nutrients in the body.
In my opinion, though both exercise & healthy diet are methods keep the body healthy, it is most effective when both of them are balanced as a part of lifestyle. Doing regular exercise & maintaining balanced diet need to co exist as part of life to stay healthy.
- With the increased global demand in oil and gas undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources To what extent do you agree 78
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- In many developing countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction What measures could be taken to prevent them 78
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases are too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun in seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ins'.
Suggestion: many ins
... considered to be most effective way by many in maintaining healthy life. On the contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16091954023 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53316795854 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1610424285 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160353000517 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637845841657 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059519011302 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106738001071 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600688887838 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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