Some think most crimes are the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that most offences are caused by negative effects of the environment surrounding them. However, others argue that the bad nature of people is the main reason of most crimes. In my opinion, the society and external factors are the culprit for every offending of criminals.
On the one hand, some may argue that offenders have a bad nature and it leads to their actions that harmful to community. This argument could be true to some extent because in criminals researches, some delinquencies confess that they committed crime because they wanted to satisfy themselves by hurting others. In the fact that many offenders are prone to recidivism though they participated in vocational courses and re-educated camp to have another chance in life. Therefore, if only because these criminals are suffering from a difficult condition, they will not commit crimes many times like that.
On the other hand, socialists believe that the influences of circumstances have the significant role in offences. People who experimented poverty or the bad educational environment can more easily get social or psychological trouble which is responsible for most crime such as shoplifting, bank robbery, burglary… For example, criminal reports in 2018 pointed that over 30% of criminal cases were caused by people who have childhood violence or are affected by psychological shock and over 40% of the remaining cases are the result of efforts to solve life’s demands. Besides, many juvenile delinquencies confessed that they are under pressure from peers to reap applause and prove individualism or even they only imitate actions of characters in hero films and series on TV.
Taking all of this into account, individual nature and consciousness is an element of crime. However, the most crimes are the consequence accumulated by negative effect from social problems.
- Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone should accept a simpler life, while other believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion 84
- Today consumers are facing an increasing amount of advertising from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? 89
- It is believed that people who read for pleasure have developed a better imagination and better language skills than those who prefer to watch TV Do you agree or disagree 84
- Nowadays, a lot of charities and organizations have set up a number of days name the special day to attract people's attention, like National Children's day, National Non-smoking Day. Why do they have to do so, and what will the effects be? 78
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36148648649 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90329708231 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.2903640284 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.25 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278714576856 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968581480279 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766653836217 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171730679528 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620780056122 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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