Sports should be made mandatory for all children as it helps in physical health.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that athletics play an essential factor towards a child well-being and bodily health hence required to be obligatory in school. I completely agree with this opinion and think that involving children into physical activities make them active and healthy which is essential for a better growth.
First of all, I believe that involving kids into sports make them more enthusiastic and confident. For playing outdoor games children needs to move there body frequently and precisely in some cases, which make them active unlike sitting Indoor and playing video games. Playing in front of spectators vanishes the fear of crowd which incorporate confidence in them. For example, many school provide scholarship to the student who is good in sports as they understand the capability of active students. Thus, good physical heath important for child growth and can be achieved only by playing.
Secondly, every kids like playing and by doing so they are making themselves immune to disease, which is a great benefit in today's time. It is considered that exercising makes our body more healthy and strong hence by playing any sports kids unknowingly do the exercises which make them stronger. As per the recent surveys it is found that children who play outdoor sports are more prone to diseases than the one who play video games. That's why, it’s more important to play for good health.
To conclude, sports needs to be made compulsory in schools because it make children more immune and energetic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many schools
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the exercises which make them stronger. As per the recent surveys it is found that...
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Suggestion: That's
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...e made compulsory in schools because it make children more immune and energetic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5561335917 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576612903226 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0734662028 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203102253692 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811135227458 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435241811159 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141979445208 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273307657741 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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