The spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalization produce positive effects for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?
Prevalence of international firms and rise in globalization yield positive results for all. I, however, disagree with this notion as I believe along with benefits of multinational organizations and globalization, their drawbacks cannot be overlooked.
Strengthening employment is the most predominant advantage of widespread of globalization and firms operating in multi nations. This is because, young aspirants can secure jobs with handsome salary in their own countries rather than moving to abroad. In contrast, in yester years, in order to obtain suitable job, professional had to migrate overseas where they could find appropriate and well paid profile. American Express, Deloite, Standard Charter bank, Fortis health care are good paradigms which are now operating in metro cities of India and providing lucrative remuneration as well as working culture and aspirants are likely to join these firms than moving abroad for hunting the right job.
I believe negative aspects of multinational companies and globalization are hazardous for environment and human beings. With regard to environment, construction and production in these companies proved to be deleterious due to high level of air, water and noise pollution. For the sake of more land for setting up manufacturing units of multinational companies, deforestation is encouraged enormously and no habitat left for wild animals. A number of species, resultantly, are going to instinct. As for humans, development of new health complications came into existence which could never seen before. For instance, Ebola, which is life threatening disease, spread from South Affrica in the entire world.
In conclusion, despite the advantage of employment for youngsters, disadvantages of environmental effects and health complications for humans are too dire to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74264705882 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26595597423 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9413444313 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197386323535 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657729118887 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590894354444 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116173758356 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580022661576 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.