Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?
Nowadays physical disorders linking with stress have become commonplace. I believe that imbalance in work and personal life is prime contributor to this phenomenon while environmental problems can also be counted as the secondary factor. This essay will explain aforementioned points in detail alongside viable solutions that might help in mitigating the root.
Firstly, work-life balance is essential in todays' world as one merely can spare time from hectic schedule for recreational purposes or even to spend it with family. If relaxation time is not available, it can cause severe health issues such as mental trauma which can be in any form such as anxiety and depression. Because of this reason, psychiatrists recommend two hour of stress-free time to be spared every day to relax mind. Additionally, environmental disturbances such as noise pollution generated by vehicles and construction sites could also be the issue, as it is backed by the latest researches which have promisingly linked these with loss of focus and troubled subconscious.
While above mentioned problems seems to be the root causes, certain remedies are available to us. First of all, as per the suggestion, one must spend time on leisure activities, such as outing with friends, to calm the mind. These not only help to relax but also assist in better understanding of life problems as one can focus on overall picture. Furthermore, government should impose strict environmental policies such as confined construction space and ban on loud vehicle horns. These steps will significantly reduce noises and raise the quality of life. For instance, Bhutan has imposed these laws and surveys have found an exponential drop in mental strain in that country.
In conclusion, while unavailability of free-time and loud noises in metropolitan can stem mental sickness, certain steps can be taken by individual and government to reduce the effects, namely, planned daily life schedule and environmental laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39549839228 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00738503008 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.509134288 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082569671479 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304716559354 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299924283264 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582114751609 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037124658454 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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