Excessive consumption of sugar leads to many health problems. However, health should be the first and foremost focus of every person because I believe a healthy person can make a meaningful contribution to society and become a world better place to live. In this essay, I will discuss both contrasting views along with my opinion.
Apparently, sugar is considered to be one of the vital ingredients in most of our food preparations. Regardless of age, people are addicted to any foodstuff which is particularly sweet in taste. Though, individuals often forget the fact that the kind of health-related problems. For instance, according to a BBC survey, 40 percent of the world population are suffering from diabetes, heart-related problems which have been caused by over-consumption. As a result, excessive consumption of sugar intake can lead to severe problems in a person’s life. Therefore, people should adopt a healthy lifestyle by including sugar-free products in their diet.
On the other hand, the government can pitch in and take a few leads in regulating in prevailing health issues among the people caused by consuming more amount of sugar in their foods. Firstly, they should encourage food and drinks companies to produce less sugary products. For instance, producing low-sweet juices will eventually protect citizens from taking sugary products. Secondly, the government should motivate citizens to lead a healthy life.
In conclusion, in my opinion, though the government can play a crucial role in managing and shaping people's lives, it is finally up to the individuals to take self-care for themselves in terms of health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...intake can lead to severe problems in a persons life Therefore people should adopt a he...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...motivate citizens to lead a healthy life In conclusion in my opinion though the g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17307692308 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88879440876 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 260.0 20.2975951904 1281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1345.0 106.682146367 1261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 260.0 20.7667163134 1252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 171.0 7.06120827912 2422% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126012574113 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126012574113 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768815714018 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193266944011 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 132.9 13.0946893788 1015% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -192.42 50.2224549098 -383% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.7 11.3001002004 927% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.19 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.72 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 106.0 10.1190380762 1048% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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