Task 2: Some people think that organizing international sports events is good for the host country while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Many individuals claim that global games, which are organized by the host country, are valuable for the actual nation but others believe it is disastrous. This paragraph below will state both views and my personal view.
On one hand, facilitating a major occasion will make the country's residents pleased to see their nation is in the global features, boosting their enthusiasm. The country's contesters will get the opportunity to get prizes from the nation's chiefs, prompting a success via web-based media, TVs, paper, the web,… Not just that, the young people of the host nation will have inspiration to play the game more much of the time and locally. This part can assist discovering residents with sports possible simpler.
Then again, during the incident of the occasions, psychological warfare can be a risky power for the security to deal with, which implies more cash should be spent in to send military powers to ensure that the occasions will be gotten on the whole viewpoints. This cash can be formed into clinical benefits, purchasing garments and food sources for poor people and accomplish more helpful things. These sort of occasions are, at some point, upsets the nearby inhabitants with commotion contamination and make large gridlocks.
As I would see it, these occasions ought to be made all the more oftentimes to help the host country economy and lift their resident’s patrollism, and furthermore advance harmony and love between the host country and the visitor nations. Indeed, cash should be spent for poor people however I concur that facilitating a global game occasion will profit the host country considerably more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...via web-based media, TVs, paper, the web,… Not just that, the young people of the ...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'These nulls'?
Suggestion: This sort; These nulls
...ple and accomplish more helpful things. These sort of occasions are, at some point, upsets...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, sort of, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20149253731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66445084111 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5028056988 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146662972435 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639140662554 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411589419397 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101580208653 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553348463849 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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