The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that people likes to imitate other people, most especially when it comes to the latest trend in fashion and other consumer goods. This phenomenon I think is attributed to the social pressures that people are constantly subjected to. This is a very common trend nowadays, especially that we are living in a modern age were people are able to know the latest popular consumer goods of other countries through the use of the internet which allows them to be updated about things.
For one, people are constantly faced with social pressure and acceptance that they would do things in order to feel belonged. For instance, nowadays people wear light clothing such as T-shirts, shorts and jeans. If a person wears a bit different, such as clothes that are different from normal clothing that people wear, they would certainly see them as inappropriate and often times they are targeted for jokes and amusement. In other words, humans have a tendency to follow social conformity in order for them to be accepted by others.
Moreover, people have a tendency to be jealous of other people possessions and would also think of trying one for themselves. For instance, a man who had bought the latest model of a smartphone which he showed to his friends; Upon seeing how beautiful the phone was and how powerful its specs were, they decided to buy one too. This is why people have the tendency to copy one another due to the reason that they envy what they do not have.
In conclusion, I am persuaded to say that people imitate each other because of the need to be part of the norms of the society. It helps them to feel they are belonged and they are not different from other people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68120805369 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43339499418 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6596052027 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246929247484 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939342284474 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569527352033 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138100851102 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442627269521 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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