In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
What is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In recent decades, As we have seen, almost of corporations get the attention of customers by publishing that their products are newly discovered as compared to the others. However, From my point of view, I am of the opinion that their advertisements have their own advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of it.
To begin with, It seems clear that brand identity is crucial in the consumption reaction; that is why neutral firms are always looking for standing out from other candidates by focusing on advertising their products. To some extent, It works. iPhone, for instance, is the product line of an American multinational technology company that is widely considered to be a top of the extravagant smartphone with a record sold thanks to the high efforts when building up the uniqueness in their logo. Moreover, Such advertising trends are enabled to push employees to develop new innovative points for a better outcome, which allow production to become more increasingly valuable.
Nevertheless, Despite the positives mentioned above, there are certain drawbacks which need taking into consideration. To be specific, some illegal private enterprises took advantage of noticing in media to profiteering through forming the client's unrealistic expectations. The common advertisement on youtube in present-day - Fake traditional herbal medicine, take an example, often magnify the distinctive medical ability by using vivid images about healthy and energetic people recovering from a long illness; regardless of they hardly useless, which even weaken the inherent health of the patients. In another case, according to the media user surveys, most of them quite uncomfortable when they came across excessive advertising about the overestimation contrast the actual products.
To sum up, while the potential benefits of product promotion idea belong to well-established enterprise with a good sense of business ethic make it seem like a good idea, I hold a strong belief that the disadvantages of such advertisements still outweigh the advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48598130841 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17291770077 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685358255452 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3354742811 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199453290528 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644988442075 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387481849546 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107142557209 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547698644767 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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