There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it by examples.
In this modern era of industrialization, there is one big issue that exist all around the world, that is noise pollution. There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our lives.This essay examines the major reasons for the hike in sound pollution including industrialization and increased population. Further, it will provide some suggestive measures that could be taken to mitigate it and present my opinion about the same.
The primary reason for this issue is increased population, the amount of noise is directly proportional to the number of people. As the population increases, the number of gadgets, motorized vehicles and other equipments usage also increases. Industrialization is another big issue that accelerates the noise pollution. Various machineries installed in industries for processing, sorting, packaging and other purposes, create huge amount of sound. Moreover, new industries are established at the cost of clearing forest areas, which further increases the level of noise in those areas.
To mitigate this world-wide issue of noise, necessary actions could be taken. Awareness programs to put control on population could be the most effective way to control pollution. At least, we should control the population of migrants to big cities to reduce noise there. Another significant solution to this problem could be planting more trees, as trees have the potential to absorb sound thus making the environment more peaceful. In a research conducted by Harvard University on 1500 cities of India, in 2010, it was found that areas with more trees experience 20% lesser noise than those with no trees.
In my opinion, there is an urgent need to deal with this problem as in the future years, it could raise to an ungoverned level. We should aware the local people about the side-effects of excessive noises in our life. Further, they should be motivated to put their contribution to combat with this issue. In a survey conducted by New York times on 2600 students, it was found that sound badly effect their concentration and studies grade.
In conclusion, noise in the form of traffic, music, industrial process and many others has become an indispensable part of our lives.The two major reasons for increased noise is industrialization and increased population. To mitigate this issue, we should bring awareness about population control and plant more trees and in my opinion, people should be informed about the hazardous effects of noise on our psychological health and encouraged to work on its alleviation collectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29975429975 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02139181582 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.668697372 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.526315789 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267292376646 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821489507852 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468719711665 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158198964132 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385723713558 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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