These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?
There is a controversial issue about the impact of long separation on the family bonds, while traveling overseas for business reasons. Some economists claim that it causes many positive effects on the family, while some social workers state that it leads to household problems. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this and agree that it creates more complications to families.
Let us start with the advantages of moving to other countries with family members. The first benefit is that many people will not suffer from loneliness on business trips. Employees, who travel abroad for long, often miss their family, but now that they can relocate to other nations with their family, they will stop longing for motherland. Another positive effect is that family ties usually remain stable. Many families break relationship, when living overseas on business, one of the spouses decides to divorce, because they find another partner, but travelling with family helps avoid such situations. Therefore, the opportunity to take family strengthens relationship and prevents it from collapses, while doing work abroad.
However, despite these advantages, business trips overseas have many drawbacks. Firstly, it may pose discomfort on children in education. Children may feel frustrated, when their parents often change residence, because it is difficult for them to both adjust to a new school and make friends with classmates. Secondly, the other spouse may have to quit a perspective job. Many wives, for instance, are to resign from their suitable workplace and seek a new position in a new country, which often forces them to start a career again. As a result, business relocation to another country with family creates problems to other members with the settled lifestyle.
In conclusion, even though some economists believe that traveling with family on business trips has many positive sides, I think that this type of journey imposes more problems to the other members of the family for the above mentioned reasons.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64471416821 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5475735971 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29782868343 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894799060199 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551661608443 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170850484649 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760330707622 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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