These days people pay more attention to artists (writers, painters and so on) and give less importance to science and technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, due to the easy access to the internet and various types of media such as TV, radio and Newspaper people could access the latest News based on their taste and I believe that among all types of the News those which are related to the artists such as actors, actresses, musicians and the like are more popular in societies. There are two main reasons for this which will be discussed.
There are some important reasons why people pay more attention to artists. Firstly, the artists are more on the media and since they are followed by paparazzis and journalists they are usually on the tabloids, magazines or the News and they have a great role in the fashion industry so they are usually in various adverts. Secondly, they are influential role models for people especially youngsters who try tu pursue their life style, haircut and clothing. A salient example of this is USA in which almost 40% of the teenagers are immensely impressed by artists and it had some detrimental effects on their life such as dropping out of school, using drugs, attending unappropriated parties and committing a suicide.
On the other hand, the importance of scientists and professors in modern societies is neglected due to some significant reasons. One of the most significant reasons for this scheme is the increasing number of vanity projects that are just a show off for politicians and they have no impressive and vivid consequences to impact the society. Furthermore, the government authorities of developed countries are reluctant to reveal the name of the scientific researches and the scientists due to the security issues and they try to conceal the result of these investigations. As a result, people are unfamiliar with the result of the projects. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times Magazine, indicates that the more than 40% of the American nuclear projects were secrete and never announced among people.
In conclusion, not only the artists but also the scientists, teachers, athletes, doctors and many other vocations are crucial in each society and it is not fair to make awareness about some particular groups of jobs among the residents of cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00543478261 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77293239446 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0634680861 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10974689674 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442155296493 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583968185897 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576723057767 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351390487031 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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