Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.
I have no doubt in saying that more the child explore himself in activities like puzzles, board games and pictures, the greater the impact it brings on overall child growth. Although, there are many activities which can facilitate a higher level of improvement in children's growth but results can be much better if those activities bears a direct relationship with children interest. Let's discuss some of most common activities which a kid must do in order to achieve 40% growth development in his body.
Firstly, There are many activities out there which predicts that a kid must do but we will cover the commonly used ones today in this essay. Puzzles are the great way to unlock human brain potential where kids has to look out for all the pieces, and then put them to the proper sequence. After this we connect all the puzzles to resolve mystery. When I was a kid I used to find this game very intriguing. In addition to this, some kids were often able to tap into the other half part of the brain which was dead and unutilized by them since their birth. Secondly, Chess is the game I think every children should be exposed to at least thrice in a week and especially younger children because it actually forces them to think and form multiple strategies to beat their enemies on their turf. For instance, nowadays every school encourages it's young children to play and learn chess and even participate at the national and state level chess competition. Furthermore, there is a quota of around 10% on extra circular activities which can even help you in your dream of enrolling into one of your favorite college.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that if we can engage children's in such activities like chess and puzzles then it can definitely bring a drastic change in their overall learning and thought process which may lead to a better and secured future for our next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, at least, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74242424242 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51467867041 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3574422365 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5833333333 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10004860414 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377674713593 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544502561326 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727397951632 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362343675124 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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