In my opinion, self learning is a good way for children explore. Whereas, it is puzzles, board game or any other thing. They are really helpful for trigger brainstorming especially for children. However, on the other hand, there are plethora amount of activities can play significant role for children growth. I put my views, with relevant examples.
At begin with, nowadays, indoor game play very effective role in the children life. Most of the children spend their time with computer and mobile in home. There are several reason, firstly, cyber group of networking has established many kind of brainstorming game in the form of puzzles, animated characters and socail networks just like facebook, Twitter and so on. It is best way for communication with native people and learn new tips and techniques regarding all over the world. On the other hand, it has some disadvantages, children are the hunting of health issues, obesity, eye infection and many more. For example, according to latest survey reports 70 percent children are involved in many diseases just because of non physical activity.
Secondly, there are many alternates to mounting children development. Text book is the best way for increase children IQ levels. There are many documentary books and DVD available in markets and internet. Parents should try to develop children interest from this site rather than different kind of games. Physical activity is also necessary for children development and it can help for increasing blood circulation in overall body.In couple of months ago, I saw BBC news, there are many software engineer who has completed his study in very young age and company is providing huge amount of salary. So, I personally believe that, there are many way to increase children evolution.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, games and puzzles are also good for children growth. However, except it there are many alternates who can play effective role in children life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: amounts
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Suggestion: many kinds
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Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13931888545 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68583301259 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.4015614712 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659291102461 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251828777336 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388526075666 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470586059622 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155283065472 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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