Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it compared with other drugs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
Smoking cigarette is deemed injurious to health. Some people assert tobacco should be made illegal for consumption. Although it is a negative trend, I, however, believe drug legalization should be encouraged as it will bring more benefits to the nation.
Firstly, the federal government can not collect taxes on the industries if tobacco is made unlawful. While I concede that making drugs illegal will balance the situation in short term but the problem is in the long term escalation of black marketing will take place. As a result, the government will miss the opportunity to collect tax from the drugs producing firms hence overall revenue will decline. Canada is the best example, which had made consumption of Marijuana legal and people can purchase it from the general stores which have injected approximately over $50 billion to Canada coffers.
The increasing offense is another area of concern. Many supporters of prohibiting tobacco claim that it will help to mitigate addiction problems and tobacco are detrimental to health than any other drugs. I would argue that banning cigars or other tobacco has never made drugs disappear. In fact, offenders are finding illegal methods to consume drugs. This proliferation in law breaching is widely noticed where the government is not supporting legal drug system. Consequently, more violence comes to the police. Thus, the cost of regulation will be higher than confining it.
To conclude, not only restricting tobacco causes more disorganized crime, but also revenue from the drug sector will decline. Although I acknowledge that tobaccos are harmful to well-being, I disagree that prohibiting tobacco will control the condition of drug ill-usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, in fact, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36802973978 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80078405375 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1112773456 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171697203691 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569668695166 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557153415907 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113237618942 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409829015668 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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