Nowadays an increasing number of tourists prefer to have a trip in countries which have a detrimental surrounding environment , such as Sahara desert or Antarctic. It is wort to consider advantages and drawbacks of these trips.
On the one hand, the greatest proportion of people have lived in a major cities, such as Moscow, Berlin, London, which have overpopulation, and, unfortunately, environmental repercussion which desires to be significant better is adverse. All of them build up pollution: sound pollution, air pollution, water pollution, increasing effects of human disease. Because of its, numerous people enjoy spending their holidays in the best places of whole wide world, avoiding polluting items during the short period of days . This enviroment is healthy and despite having some heavy burdens , people opt calm, quite area to relax. Moreover, deserts and a wild nature allow a person to be with own thoughts , reconsidering personal life, altering imagination, worldview have a vital meaning. For instance, some famous artists such as Ayvozovsky painted the most known pictures in the wild environment. In addition, this journey is financially economic, because there are not shops, galleries which entice to purchase goods . As a result, individuals enjoy being in a removing because they have economical benefits, rethinking own lives .
On the negative side, if person lives in very uncomfortable habitation and has a poor economic circumstances , this person will not afford a travelling. Instead of having trip, this one will improve the own economical position. Usually, people having a good financial income, living in a comfortable habitation could afford themselves to investigate another culture . However, spending a holiday in depopulated areas imposes detrimental requests on people which are not able bear everyone. Some of them suffering and acquire an injures, others overcome these difficulties and derive pleasure , giving rise a desire to visit more the country. Furthermore, person visiting such places does not gain knowledge, such asculture, traditions. Because it is essential to contribute a personal developing. Therefore, lack of self-development, additional suffering hardship bring some disadvantages which could be serious .
In conclusion, compared to the travelling in developed areas, deserted journeys have some positive and negative effects.
Everyone should opt own decision, according to personal preferences, physical ability and other reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76216216216 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16028856637 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637837837838 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.264717806 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127045788623 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354049302549 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617336848901 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633498671281 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476602064305 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.