Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays numerous cooking productions provide food diversity , as a result, people have opted junk food since it is ready food, does not require a cook process, this time-saving choice is convenient, does not cause stress. From my perspective, really this food does not waste time for cooking, nevertheless, I subscribe to the opposite proposition, because fast food is not healthy food.
It is undeniable that the modern life is more demanding, people dedicate a great proportion time to work, consequently, they do not have enough free time to relax, to cook delicious meal, so they search approaches to economize time in different daily surrounded activities. Because of these reasons, instead of consuming conventional food, which is healthy, however, requires preparation's time , people choose fast food as the main meals, such as burger kings, chips. By consuming junk food, people do not think about consequence, they are well-fed in this moment, and are not essential the years to come. In consequence, for instance, compared to two decade aga, scienific statistic indicates that the number sick people has increased two times, deseases such as obesity, blood preasure, heart attack are progresive these days. Hence, the un-exaggerated fact encourages people to pay attention about what they eat because no one does not desire to gain additional malaise. The government must raise awareness about detrimental repercussion eating junk food and convince human population to aid their health. Thus this measure decreases funding health care system, affording develop other infrastructure, for example. Therefore, people should acknowledge that it is necessary to concentrate attention on their consumptions, giving rise the healthy society.
Moreover, it is worth remarking that food advertisement is the omnipresent in the modern world, attracting public interest, reminding about a product, encouraging to purchase variety food items. A person has a propensity following habits, other people, attractions , so this consume due to an advertising influence . As a result, people follow their whims, buying meal by an advertisement's effects.
In conclusion, fast food is the convenient way to feed population, following this way allows boosting the deaths and injuries. If people was not influenced by advertisement, the health of community would be in progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oking productions provide food diversity , as a result, people have opted junk fo...
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...thy, however, requires preparations time , people choose fast food as the main mea...
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Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...uires preparations time , people choose fast food as the main meals, such as burger ...
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Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
...re well-fed in this moment, and are not essential the years to come. In consequence, for ...
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...e, for instance, compared to two decade aga, scienific statistic indicates that the...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...e human population to aid their health. Thus this measure decreases funding health c...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to develop'
Suggestion: to develop
...s funding health care system, affording develop other infrastructure, for example. Ther...
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Message: Did you mean 'purchasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: purchasing
... reminding about a product, encouraging to purchase variety food items. A person has a prop...
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...alth of community would be in progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57222222222 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07014559691 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1966367584 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.733333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2166852829 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670361266958 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525746381032 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118818040493 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522523962033 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.