An ongoing issue is upbringing, countless articles have dedicated this issue, giving rise to comprehension of rearing process. It is claimed that parents should possess parenting courses, from my perspective, I completely agree with this proposition because of inexperience of parents.
It seems undeniable that a majority of parents do not possess great skills and a profound experience to provide the right parenting decisions on different occasions. So parents are not confident in their solutions and frequently these are wrong. Consequently, our youngsters have stress, pressure, depression, when they are confronted by the detrimental situations or face unpredictable events, not making contribution of development of every child. Thus, by making a correct decision, adults advance child development . In order to make the right solutions, obviously, parents have to attend special parental training lessons reinforcing their knowledge, increasing productivity of contribution of child development. For instance, a child who is raised in supportive families reaches more essential results in life rather than a child with a parenting attention deficit. As a result, without a doubt, there are numerous parents without enormous skills, any experience. If the government imposes them to attend parenting classes, they would be more knowledgeable in making decisions.
Moreover, more and more achievement are changing our daily lives, we should maintain our knowledge to be competence in applying these. Because of heavy workload, a huge proportion of parents are not able to gain knowledge of achievement , thereby, their offspring are more knowledgeable than adults, so they do not obey the parent’s rules, losing supervisor functions as a result. Instead of using ordinary approach of parenting, parents should admit new modern methods of parenting, which enhance own knowledge, broadening horizon . Therefore, parents are necessary to maintain own knowledge to be suitable to the modern world, to deserve child’s respect.
In conclusion, it is challenging to make effective solutions without parenting foundation, hence educational process is compulsory to parents. Deserving child’s respect is significant to manage rearing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88073394495 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23812374111 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6309042045 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.1875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252301331198 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838380184411 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07024572763 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135203574152 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663794385805 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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