In the past people like to store knowledge in books. However, in the present , we prefer to store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages overweight the disadvantages?
Compared to method of storing information in the past, nowadays people opt the way to preserve information on the internet. From my perspective, the benefits are more than the drawbacks, I believe that the internet should contain only superficial dates, which do not damage any personal interest.
Compared to method of storing information in the past, nowadays people opt the way to preserve information on the internet. From my perspective, the benefits are more than the drawbacks, I believe that the internet should contain only superficial dates, which do not damage any personal interest.
It seems undeniable that the internet in the modern world is the great source of database which provides necessary information. It is worth remaking that the internet offers easy way searching needed aspects, facts and this is available at any point of the globe, does not require to do some physical actions, such as reconsidering countless books to gain knowledge of some facts. Thus, the internet has facilitated numerous aspects of human activity, it is not necessary to do the great number efforts to achieve some outcome. For instance, before visiting other country, a person could read about this country on the Internet , after acquiring knowledge of the country map , this person can find the booked hostel without major actions. Moreover, while the internet does not request special resources, book productions utilize paper, ink. Therefore,the convenience of searching features without physical efforts , the availability of the internet make the internet storing is more significant rather than the book keeping.
Nevertheless, there are no doubts that book keeping of knowledge also has merits because provides the confident way storing, these days hackers of the internet steal frequently some huge database, hence people cannot trust this saving process. So, instead of the internet storing, people enjoy keeping valuable documents by book storage. Furthermore, person often purchases online goods on the internet, filling in electronic reservation form by personal date, than someone use this personal information for own gains, bringing disadvantage to this personality. In my opinion, people should be well-advised, it is impossible to predict how others can apply their individual personal dates. Consequently, although the internet keeping really has demerits, people should avoid any harmful influentials, however, this has huge benefits which overcome drawbacks at all. As a result, people should matter about their confident information, and use the internet for a superficial storing.
In conclusion, the internet could be remarkable to keep the superficial database, the property of omnipresent and facilitated searching of facts make it is vital in comparison to the book storing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55140186916 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92431025792 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492990654206 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8782336716 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.764705882 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3529411765 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189886843289 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691091101198 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041112106635 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113112664486 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446749576016 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.