Most people pay taxes to contribute to the development of their country, however, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Numerous people obey the authority law which imposes taxes on human income, financial capital of the government allows to improves infrastructure of their country and other aspects which require some funding, by contrast, some individuals believe that other duties are more essential than responsibility of taxes. From my perspective, I subscribe to the preposition though certainly other obligations are significant for everyone, but paying taxes should be compulsory for every person.
On the one hand, the majority of people have chosen to attend a public school and public hospitals, probably, it is convenient being imposed by taxes and use public services, organizations which are controlled by the authority’s government, resulting in an increase in the demands for schools supplied by modern equipments, for hospital supported by advanced medical robots, for public entertainment which afford person to pertain to this country. By levying taxes, the government has had the state capital , so they can defray expenses which it is necessary to maintain constructions, develop new infrastructure and increase the opportunity of their members. For instance, compared to the past, nowadays the website www.pfr.ru has been created by the government, this offers elderly people to control the pension online, to make a registration for acquiring medical services, as a result, several human operations are facilitated, simplified. Therefore, a tax bills must be imposed to develop, maintain public infrastructure.
On the other hand, others believe that it is best way to achieve the prosperous results is pay a lot attention their responsibilities. For instance, they are healthy and than why do they pay taxes to contribute the development of medical system.
In conclusion, the government should charge a tax bills for maintaining infrastructure, and people should pay a lot of attention to personal responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64261168385 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31921935309 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.86865523 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.444444444 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236109144428 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109976865993 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06749498969 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168009573207 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786821733113 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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