In some counties younger people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
tistic. This essay will examine the causes and suggest a solution.
It seems undeniable that technology has influenced the way of studying . Diversity sites are devoted to expose a varity of methods and approaches to gaining knowledge, skills, habits, values. Without a doubt, this way reaps advantages, a majority of learners have been opted for the blended leaning, which offer to combine online courses and common classroom classes. Thus nowaday a teacher is someone who creates a desire to learn a subject and also a teacher as a supervisor should control educational activities and enhance own knowledge, however , it is more challenging compared to the teacher's responsibilities in the past. So a heavy teacher workload does not entice youngsters to be a teacher, giving rise prospering other professions. Moreover, it is worth remarking that a teacher's salary does not relate to efforts that they do to achieve desired outcome. For instance, it is not so much complicated to work as a software engineer who has a higher salary rather than a teacher, because it is so demanding to be in the public eye. Therefore, people desire to avoid burdens in lives, choosing professions which do not require enormous efforts in the years to come, which afford to earn desired wages , are essential to everyone, they facilitate own lives, bringing happiness in their lives.
Nevertheless, the key to solving this issue exists, in my opinion, is that the necessity to solve the global problems of humanity, such as global warming, the extinction of natural resources, eliminating pollution, responsibility for satisfying the needs of raising population. Instead of focusing on the problem of lack of educational specialists, governments have to tackle the mentioned issues, implementing different approaches. Apparently, for example, the governments in prosperous countries in the world, such as Australia, England, the USA, can afford to concentrate their attention on solving this educational issue, because the global problems in these countries are not crucial so far and it is fair, the level of education is higher than education in other countries. As a result, by overcoming the global issues, the government in developing countries can focus on solving this educational issue.
In conclusion, a teacher heavy workload and a teacher low salary do not attract younger people to choose a teacher's profession , decreasing the number of professionals in this field. If developing countries could solve their acute issues, authorities would be able to concentrate their attention on this task.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34558823529 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06835574917 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546568627451 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7688601754 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.4 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089947189152 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300094379401 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204311572954 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545567654081 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143470124355 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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