Some people think that giving homework to students is not a good idea. Others believe that homework is good and helps students achieve better grades. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Numerous scientific jobs are dedicated to education as high-quality education is essential in any society. The question of homework has been considered and people’s opinions are divided on the point. While a huge proportion of people believe that homework is not beneficial to pupils, others confront this opinion, from my perspective, homework should be a compulsory requirement in the studying process, because this process reinforces knowledge, skills, aiding youngsters to gain an advanced outcome.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the school curriculum is overfilled, nowadays, a heavy teacher workload is not surprised fact , although subjects explained by teachers expose only a basic subject's knowledge which is not enough to be a high achiever for university's entrance exams, in order to achieve this aim, students need a profound academic background, skills. Moreover, it is worth remarking the classical definition of a teacher. A teacher is someone who creates a desire to investigate the subject. So, a teacher is someone who directs learners, who is a supervisor, who corrects studying acting, who motivates students, but pupils accomplish the main role in studying. Hence, doing homework without doubts is the main request of any learning activity. Moreover, giving homework exercise yields advantage and shapes character traits as hard work as well as persistence. For instance, not without reason famous scientists, who tackle serious scientific issues, are hard workers. Therefore, it is reasonable to add responsibility of homework, as by carrying out homework , students acquire deeper knowledge, skills, hence, it will allow to be a successful person in the modern world.
On the other hand, childhood should be happy, this should be a period of time without duties, pressure, detrimental events, since it is challenging to predict their destinies . Instead of imposing additional commitments to a child, close adults should facilitate child life, searching some approaches to simplify some child's actions. However, homework complicates young lives, restricting free time to relax, to communicate with friends, to do chores, to do physical activity , such as walking, swimming, skiing in order to stay healthy and maintain body stronger, consequently, their loss productivity to memorize a new topic in class and it causes illness. As a result, spending most of the time doing homework leads not being outdoors, depriving school youngsters from interaction and making their sick.
In conclusion, unfortunately, it is need to acknowledge that a teacher is not able to delivery all material related to a defined topic in class, academic background should be higher to be a success person in the years to come, so students should gain additional knowledge using a diversity of opportunities, such as blended learning, when they are out of school lessons, additionally, doing homework shapes positive spiritual qualities. Nevertheless, this commitment reduces leisure time of youngsters, occurring profound adverse effects of being healthy. In my opinion, fulfilling homework yields more benefits than drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2666.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58909853249 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09446731682 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593291404612 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.258549687 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.111111111 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0555555556 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164769056617 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500430981844 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484242465332 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983358568899 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339662105999 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 78.4519038076 217% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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