Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples from your own experience.
It is considered by some that the best approach to entice person to be hard worker is to make salary equals to the work efficiency. From my perspective, I completely agree with this proposition and in this case profit of employer will increase .
Firstly, usually the majority of people work to earn money to satisfy their needs , some have family, relatives, hence they have responsibilities, and so they strive to ensure an excellent well-beings for them. Compared to person life in the ancient world, people who live in the modern world have a great financial dependence. By earning money, people ensure confident lives to themselves . Therefore, people are not indifferent how many money they earn, if their salaries are not enough for satisfying necessities, they would think up new methods, invent new approach to acquire more money . For instance, as is known, higher educational person has more opportunities to get a high-paying jobs and nowadays, entrance exams in any university have a great competition , it is show that salary has a great meaning for everyone . As a result, stimulating people by more higher salaries is the remarkable approach forcing them to work more productive.
Secondly, it is worth to notice that offered suggestion cater to an employers, why are employers obligated to pay salaries which exceeds their profits? certainly, every employer aims to gain more profits, given that every employee should not earn more money than the organization derive a profit by employee's activity . If this rule is not implemented, the organization would not be profitable. As a result, a employee's salary have not to be higher than the income which brings this employee.
In conclusion, a salary motivates the person to work more harder because the modern world imposes dependance from different factors surrounding person. In addition, a employer should care about profitability of the organization, so a salary of worker should not exceed this income. As a result, an employer is able to stimulate their staff by salaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97662943602 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8376063778 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121753707828 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417118193004 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411116867798 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732194836898 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475077466242 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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