Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?
The impacts of digital communication on human relationships have been a topic of controversy. While some believe that effects could be damaging, from my perspective, I contend this trend reaps both advantages and demerits.
It seems undeniable that the mobile phone has become indispensible for the most people in the modern world . The main achievement of having these devices that they expand accessibility of persons, in other words, a person could be accessable in any time , it adds a convenience in human life. Additionally, some model mobile phone have been added features, such as a built-in camera, interactive games, making it multifunctional, popular and attractive . Moreover, by using these, a person can send speechless messages to someone, this approach is valuable to dumb individuals.Futhermore, compared to the past, the expansion encouraging business in different region of the globe is observed, this occurs due to the wide word net and the mobile accessibility. This trend allow people to have a removing job, resulting in an increase in the demand for higher professional specialists in other part of the globe. As a result, having digital communication brings some benefits such as accessibility of everyone, distributing business, convenience of communication.
Nevertheless,firstly, it is worth remarking the mobile phone has had drawbacks, depriving people face to face interaction is the main disadvantage, people spend less quality of time with each other, so it causes developing disease such as stress, pressure, depression , mental disorders. Secondly, numerous people waste a lot of time playing games, it urges them to complete a mission, it will disengage them from social gathering, activities. Therefore, the modern medium of communication has the negative effect on human population because people avoid direct interactive methods, increasing the number of suffering people.
In conclusion, it is not pointless to claim that the modern medium brings drawbacks only such as eliminating face-to-face communication, wasting time by playing games, a person's accessibility is the main merit which is essential to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63190184049 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47996495766 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7545205369 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172943962093 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673819893101 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437893407958 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970947218926 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432127981684 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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